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		<title>First Draft&#8230;DONE!</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Robin Rice shares the ending... and beginning... processes once the first draft of a novel is done!]]></description>
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		<title>Editing Chapter 26 And On&#8230;</title>
		<link>http://www.maydenchronicles.com/2009/12/26/editing-chapter-26-and-on/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 26 Dec 2009 17:23:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Chapter 26 and rolling... check out where we are and the final stretch!
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		<title>Where We Are&#8230;</title>
		<link>http://www.maydenchronicles.com/2009/10/03/where-we-are/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Oct 2009 16:01:25 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Robin Rice</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Just a quick note to everyone about the writing process. I&#8217;ve taken some time to step back, create a  &#8220;map&#8221; of all the details, and am now editing the first 22 chapters to make sure we are ready for the last 8 chapters&#8230; it may be a few more weeks before there is a new [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Just a quick note to everyone about the writing process. I&#8217;ve taken some time to step back, create a  &#8220;map&#8221; of all the details, and am now editing the first 22 chapters to make sure we are ready for the last 8 chapters&#8230; it may be a few more weeks before there is a new chapter, but this is normal in the process. Making sure everything lines us is a huge piece of work, but so critical! Just think of me working behind the scenes, and wish me well! Hugs, Robin</p>
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		<title>Notes On Editing Chapters 12-16</title>
		<link>http://www.maydenchronicles.com/2009/06/06/notes-on-editing-chapters-12-16/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 06 Jun 2009 18:23:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Where is the big problem in The Mayden Chronicles? We need to know... and soon! ]]></description>
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		<title>News and Notes</title>
		<link>http://www.maydenchronicles.com/2009/05/06/news-and-notes/</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 06 May 2009 18:07:23 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Robin Rice</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Hey Everyone!

Well, my spring is off to a great start, and I'll have even more time for writing Mayden this summer as I've taken time off from my mentoring work! I'm hoping for a new chapter once a week or more instead of the ususal once every ten days! We will see... ]]></description>
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<p>Hey Everyone!</p>
<p>Well, my spring is off to a great start, and I&#8217;ll have even more time for writing Mayden this summer as I&#8217;ve taken time off from my mentoring work! I&#8217;m hoping for a new chapter once a week or more instead of the usual once every ten days! We will see&#8230; </p>
<p>Okay, so I got this message on my email, not as a comment, so I&#8217;m going to put it all for you to get my answer. I&#8217;ll keep the commenter &#8220;anon&#8221; just in case that is the preference!</p>
<p><em>Hello Robin,<br />
My name is ANON. I recently watched the videos on youtube of you giving tips on writing and I found them most informing, and they have helped alot with the books I&#8217;m writing. <span id="more-637"></span>I also like your story, and like the direction that is progressing. I really like Jake he seems like a great character(with or without his shirt) <img src='http://www.maydenchronicles.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' />  also I like Mayden, I see her as a truly three demensional character, and I like her realtionship with the magic that the twins are teaching her. I hope to see the finished article some time in the future. I was actually writing to ask you, what do you find helps with the creation of ideas for your stories also I have trouble writing beleiveable diaglogue that fits with a particluar character, if you could give me any tips that would be great. </em></p>
<p><em>Yours Magically, ANON<br />
P.S.-I hope that mayden helps anna get out of that home, that poor women needs a break.</em></p>
<p>So ANON&#8230; For the most part, my stories seem to come to me. I am open to them, always looking around for ideas. Sometimes, there are too many! And sometimes, they come in dreams. I look for stories about magic because they interest me most, but I don&#8217;t like cheesy material, so I like to think of how it would be for someone pretty normal to find out 1) they are not normal and 2) that the world is not normal.  I think to get really good ideas you have to think of what you like, and then think of what you want to say to the world. See if something comes from that.</p>
<p>Dialogue is both a skill and a gift. Skill comes in technique, and later I&#8217;ll be showing more of that.  For example, some characters will ONLY say &#8220;can&#8217;t&#8221; and others only &#8221;can not.&#8221;  I&#8217;ll tag each character with a few words only they use. But I do that in later drafts.  For now, I just try to &#8220;listen&#8221; to how they would say it, and consider that.  If it sounds like my voice on everyone, I have to go back. I see that like painting the basic outline of what I want to paint, then going back for detailed shadowing. So just get what you want to say down first, then design an image and chose words and ways of speaking (some long sentences, some short, some full sentences, some get cut off a lot), then add it later.</p>
<p>Hope that helps!  Hugs to all, and thanks for commenting! Makes for great fun! Robin</p>
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		<title>Robin&#8217;s Books + Chapter 11 Edits</title>
		<link>http://www.maydenchronicles.com/2009/04/17/robins-books-chapter-11-edits/</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Apr 2009 14:09:01 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Robin Rice</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Want to see some of my other books?  I show off my publishing history here (has she no shame?!), then go on to talk about where we are with Good and Bad as themes in Chapter 10 and 11&#8211;will we have to go backwards and rewrite?

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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Want to see some of my other books?  I show off my publishing history here (has she no shame?!), then go on to talk about where we are with Good and Bad as themes in Chapter 10 and 11&#8211;will we have to go backwards and rewrite?<BR><br />
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		<title>Editing Chapters 8, 9, &amp; 10</title>
		<link>http://www.maydenchronicles.com/2009/04/08/editing-chapters-how-to-write-a-book-8-9-10/</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 08 Apr 2009 20:30:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Robin Rice talks about editing chapters 8, 9, and 10 of The Mayden Chronicles at http://www.MaydenChronicles.com.]]></description>
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		<title>Honestly, I&#8217;m Not Thrilled With Chapter Seven</title>
		<link>http://www.maydenchronicles.com/2009/03/07/honestly-im-not-thrilled-with-chapter-seven/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 07 Mar 2009 18:53:12 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Robin Rice</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Part Four Of "So You Want To Write A Book" with Robin Rice. This edition is all about what it means to have a chapter feel ROUGH to the writer.... ]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>How to Write Books With Passion, Magic and&#8230;Stereotypes? <span>Part Four Of &#8220;So You Want To Write A Book&#8221; is all about what it means to have a chapter feel ROUGH to the writer&#8230;.<br />
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		<title>So you Want To Write A Book #3: Developing Characters &amp; Editing Chpt. 6</title>
		<link>http://www.maydenchronicles.com/2009/03/06/so-you-want-to-write-a-book-3-developing-characters-editing-chpt-6/</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 06 Mar 2009 16:19:56 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Robin Rice</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Robin's take on Chapter Six, and how to write compelling characters. ]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>How do you write compelling characters? </strong>Build it into the action&#8230;</p>
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		<title>WILD! Editing Choppy Chapter Five</title>
		<link>http://www.maydenchronicles.com/2009/02/19/wild-editing-choppy-chapter-five/</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Feb 2009 14:14:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Robin Rice</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Now The Mayden Chronicles is really taking off!  Chapter Five is all over the place...I'll tell you how I deal with that here...]]></description>
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