Comments on: Chapter 24, First Draft http://www.maydenchronicles.com/2009/12/11/chapter-twenty-four-first-draft/ New Media Education On How To Write A Book Sun, 31 Jul 2011 00:22:14 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 By: Sue http://www.maydenchronicles.com/2009/12/11/chapter-twenty-four-first-draft/comment-page-1/#comment-7179 Sue Tue, 12 Jan 2010 02:41:48 +0000 http://www.maydenchronicles.com/?p=819#comment-7179 The link: http://www.maydenchronicles.com/2009/10/31/chapter-23-first-draft/ takes me to a 'not found' page. So, have added things found from Chapter 23, to the comments here with Chapter 24. :~D "I smile full on now, because there is now way he knows he just gave me the biggest compliment he could have. Even so, it feels good." "...there is now way..." change 'now' to 'no' How so?” And how come it never feels that way, I think, but don’t ask out loud. Beginning quote before 'how' ============ Chapter 24 Sweet!!! :~) The link:

http://www.maydenchronicles.com/2009/10/31/chapter-23-first-draft/

takes me to a ‘not found’ page. So, have added things found from Chapter 23, to the comments here with Chapter 24. :~D

“I smile full on now, because there is now way he knows he just gave me the biggest compliment he could have. Even so, it feels good.”

“…there is now way…” change ‘now’ to ‘no’

How so?” And how come it never feels that way, I think, but don’t ask out loud.

Beginning quote before ‘how’

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Chapter 24

Sweet!!!

:~)

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