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		<title>By: Sue</title>
		<link>http://www.maydenchronicles.com/2009/06/07/chapter-seventeen-first-draft/comment-page-1/#comment-7143</link>
		<dc:creator>Sue</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 10 Jan 2010 03:04:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I love the comment Michael makes of &#039;going organic&#039;!! This is so true! I&#039;m convicted of giving up caffeine...which is really hard to do for me...darn...even my username on lots of things is CoffeeZilla! (lol) However, upon a time I went caffeine-less for a good few weeks...I was much more &#039;clear&#039; and &#039;creative&#039;. So I can totally relate with Michael in his comments. Reading this chapter has confirmed and convicted me once again to give up my coffee! :~D

&quot;He shrugs. “The way I figure everything out. I just kind of leave my mind and go off looking for an answer. I don’t try to hard, just sort of put it out there. Playing sports is great for it—you get into the zone, let your body move without thinking, and then an idea comes, nearly out of nowhere. That’s where I got the idea to eat organic. I was wondering how to get better at the magic, and I started playing. The soccer ball came flying at me and in the spit second before it hit me, I saw it was the junk food that was getting in the way. The ball nearly knocked me out, but when I got up, I knew I’d never eat that crap again. It would hurt me and my magic too much.”&quot;

&quot;...I don&#039;t try to hard...&quot; change &#039;to&#039; to &#039;too&#039;

&quot;...and in the spit second....&quot; (hee hee) change &#039;spit&#039; to &#039;split&#039;

&quot;“That’s how it works most times,” he says. “You don’t ever really know how you know something, you just do. It kind of lands on you, and you know it. And all the facts can seem like they point in a totally different direction, but you still feel like you just know what you know. I’ve test it out a lot.”&quot;

&quot;...I&#039;ve test it out a lot...&quot; change &#039;test&#039; to &#039;tested&#039;

&quot;“Bea thinks Anna is crazy to say you are good and Jake is a mix of good and bad, and that I’ll have to chose between you and Jake someday, to see who will be head of the family.” I pause for effect, but Michael doesn’t seem phased. Or even surprised.&quot;

&quot;...and that I&#039;ll have to chose between...&quot; change &#039;chose&#039; to &#039;choose&#039;

&quot;“She says it is way to complex to be teaching me that right away,” I quickly add. “But Anna thinks Bea’s methods of teaching me magic isn’t good, because I’m not protected and I’m learning too much, too fast.”&quot;

&quot;...it is way to complex...&quot; change &#039;to&#039; to &#039;too&#039;

&quot;...methods of teaching me magic isn&#039;t good..&quot; change &#039;isn&#039;t&#039; to &#039;aren&#039;t&#039;

:~)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I love the comment Michael makes of &#8216;going organic&#8217;!! This is so true! I&#8217;m convicted of giving up caffeine&#8230;which is really hard to do for me&#8230;darn&#8230;even my username on lots of things is CoffeeZilla! (lol) However, upon a time I went caffeine-less for a good few weeks&#8230;I was much more &#8216;clear&#8217; and &#8216;creative&#8217;. So I can totally relate with Michael in his comments. Reading this chapter has confirmed and convicted me once again to give up my coffee! :~D</p>
<p>&#8220;He shrugs. “The way I figure everything out. I just kind of leave my mind and go off looking for an answer. I don’t try to hard, just sort of put it out there. Playing sports is great for it—you get into the zone, let your body move without thinking, and then an idea comes, nearly out of nowhere. That’s where I got the idea to eat organic. I was wondering how to get better at the magic, and I started playing. The soccer ball came flying at me and in the spit second before it hit me, I saw it was the junk food that was getting in the way. The ball nearly knocked me out, but when I got up, I knew I’d never eat that crap again. It would hurt me and my magic too much.”&#8221;</p>
<p>&#8220;&#8230;I don&#8217;t try to hard&#8230;&#8221; change &#8216;to&#8217; to &#8216;too&#8217;</p>
<p>&#8220;&#8230;and in the spit second&#8230;.&#8221; (hee hee) change &#8217;spit&#8217; to &#8217;split&#8217;</p>
<p>&#8220;“That’s how it works most times,” he says. “You don’t ever really know how you know something, you just do. It kind of lands on you, and you know it. And all the facts can seem like they point in a totally different direction, but you still feel like you just know what you know. I’ve test it out a lot.”&#8221;</p>
<p>&#8220;&#8230;I&#8217;ve test it out a lot&#8230;&#8221; change &#8216;test&#8217; to &#8216;tested&#8217;</p>
<p>&#8220;“Bea thinks Anna is crazy to say you are good and Jake is a mix of good and bad, and that I’ll have to chose between you and Jake someday, to see who will be head of the family.” I pause for effect, but Michael doesn’t seem phased. Or even surprised.&#8221;</p>
<p>&#8220;&#8230;and that I&#8217;ll have to chose between&#8230;&#8221; change &#8216;chose&#8217; to &#8216;choose&#8217;</p>
<p>&#8220;“She says it is way to complex to be teaching me that right away,” I quickly add. “But Anna thinks Bea’s methods of teaching me magic isn’t good, because I’m not protected and I’m learning too much, too fast.”&#8221;</p>
<p>&#8220;&#8230;it is way to complex&#8230;&#8221; change &#8216;to&#8217; to &#8216;too&#8217;</p>
<p>&#8220;&#8230;methods of teaching me magic isn&#8217;t good..&#8221; change &#8216;isn&#8217;t&#8217; to &#8216;aren&#8217;t&#8217;</p>
<p>:~)</p>
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		<title>By: Alesia</title>
		<link>http://www.maydenchronicles.com/2009/06/07/chapter-seventeen-first-draft/comment-page-1/#comment-1843</link>
		<dc:creator>Alesia</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Jun 2009 20:45:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I liked it when Michael was talking about &#039;putting it out there and letting the answer come.&#039; It made me ponder that, how the universe speaks to us in unexpected ways. Very cool.
I liked the end of the chapter too, now having Jake in on the plan for Anna. The plot thickens! :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I liked it when Michael was talking about &#8216;putting it out there and letting the answer come.&#8217; It made me ponder that, how the universe speaks to us in unexpected ways. Very cool.<br />
I liked the end of the chapter too, now having Jake in on the plan for Anna. The plot thickens! <img src='http://www.maydenchronicles.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Robin Rice</title>
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		<dc:creator>Robin Rice</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Jun 2009 21:13:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Glad to keep your interest, Tiffany! And so glad you stopped by Ellen! Now, to start at the beginning and read all the way through. Hugs!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Glad to keep your interest, Tiffany! And so glad you stopped by Ellen! Now, to start at the beginning and read all the way through. Hugs!</p>
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		<title>By: Ellen DuBois</title>
		<link>http://www.maydenchronicles.com/2009/06/07/chapter-seventeen-first-draft/comment-page-1/#comment-1581</link>
		<dc:creator>Ellen DuBois</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 08 Jun 2009 12:55:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Robin, this is the first I&#039;ve read af the Mayden Cronicles, and I&#039;m hooked. Fabulous writing! Thank you for sharing this with us. Brilliant, engaging, captivating. Can&#039;t wait to read all of it. Ellen</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Robin, this is the first I&#8217;ve read af the Mayden Cronicles, and I&#8217;m hooked. Fabulous writing! Thank you for sharing this with us. Brilliant, engaging, captivating. Can&#8217;t wait to read all of it. Ellen</p>
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		<title>By: Tiffany Montavon</title>
		<link>http://www.maydenchronicles.com/2009/06/07/chapter-seventeen-first-draft/comment-page-1/#comment-1575</link>
		<dc:creator>Tiffany Montavon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 08 Jun 2009 03:09:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ah! family drama has gone global now, eh? interesting...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ah! family drama has gone global now, eh? interesting&#8230;</p>
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