Comments on: First Draft, Chapter Three

By: Shirin Meiners

Shirin Meiners — Fri, 27 Feb 2009 21:20:36 +0000

Love it! Anxiously moving on to the next Chapter!

By: Jessica

Jessica — Wed, 11 Feb 2009 19:38:19 +0000

I think it would be fabulous if it were Bea from Venus – I loved her character! You might need some backstory there since she was talking about transforming, but I think it would be totally worth it, and I imagine your other Venus readers would love to see how she got to where she is now in this book. Can’t wait till chapter 5 gets posted!

By: Robin Rice

Robin Rice — Sun, 08 Feb 2009 21:32:50 +0000

Bea is the Bea from Venus…I think! We will have to see if she stays who she was, but the general idea and “place” is the same. Thanks for reading and commenting!

By: Jessica

Jessica — Sun, 08 Feb 2009 17:44:55 +0000

Bea! Oh, I would love it if it were Bea from Venus…As with all of your other books that I’ve read, I’m hooked! Moving on to chapter 4

By: endy Elwell

endy Elwell — Sun, 25 Jan 2009 02:15:58 +0000

I love the way the chapters begin. Powerful one-liners. “Today the old lady is going to talk.” “I’m stuck.” “You have a boyfriend…more of a statement then a question.” They get you thinking and keep your interest, before you know it you’re at the end of the chapter and can’t wait to see what happens next. Personally, I’m ready for Chapter 4!