Comments on: Chapter One: First Draft

By: Robin Rice

Robin Rice — Sun, 08 Feb 2009 16:39:12 +0000

Thanks, Audrey, I’m soooo glad it is captivating you. That is the goal… a super story. Read on!

By: Audrey Murphy

Audrey Murphy — Sat, 07 Feb 2009 21:43:23 +0000

Im captivated,so much so I feel Im walking with Mayden, this is a fascinating journey, looking forward to reading more, so looking forward to reading more Thank you

By: Gena Smith

Gena Smith — Fri, 06 Feb 2009 09:33:27 +0000

I realy enjoyed this a lot. Thank you for sharing it. Olah Robin. I see some of my writing is still on your page.
I cannot wait to read the rest of this.
I am working on my secound book now.

By: Starra

Starra — Thu, 05 Feb 2009 21:15:35 +0000

Robin – I love the intrigue! I think that’s why people are drawn in right away. I already want to know if the cat will survive, what the old woman knows, what the old woman will say, how Mayden got to know her (besided the father owning the place), and how and when Mayden will address her own authenticity. Wonderful! As a fellow writer, I love intrigue and the discovery of a story itself.

As an actor, before our performances, a theatre professor used to say to us “It’s magic time!” That’s how I feel before I start writing a story as well. Magic time!

On to reading Chapter two! Thank you Robin for such wonderful emotions and words for me to absorb. : )

By: Robin Rice

Robin Rice — Wed, 04 Feb 2009 02:08:16 +0000

Yea! That is what we try to do Rachel… keep you guessing. If you know plot lines, it would be great to have your ideas… all the more fun if we are interactive! Hugs!

By: Rachel

Rachel — Wed, 04 Feb 2009 01:43:03 +0000

OMG!! this is amazing, i mean i was acturly sucked into the story, and i could mot see where the story was going, which is a good thing, for i know plot lines as if they were standing right in front of me. i love it, it simply blew my mind.

By: amylee bathory

amylee bathory — Sun, 25 Jan 2009 00:31:20 +0000

this book is wow it had me the first sentence i read

By: Leslea M. Harmon

Leslea M. Harmon — Fri, 23 Jan 2009 13:55:28 +0000

She sounds like a bad girl! Or maybe just a desperate girl!? Either way, sounds like fun!

By: moquistone

moquistone — Wed, 14 Jan 2009 15:56:01 +0000

You grabbed me immediately when I realized the cat was sick — I also like the juxtaposition of a teenager and a nursing home — I want to read more

By: Sadi

Sadi — Mon, 12 Jan 2009 17:50:15 +0000

hm, well I’m glad I didn’t come off as rude. A little tendency of mine.. I get that Julie hasn’t had much time to really develop yet, so thats why Im sticking with your story. And Im not sure if its the writing, or my habit of overprotecting what I like. -.-’
Reguardless, I anticipate an update. =]